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"the secret side of me

I never let you see

I keep it caged

but I can't control it"

You ran as fast as you could, trailing blobs of black blood behind you. Your pupils dilated, and panting, your madness reaching your ends, very slowly.
You could hear the calls of them, but they weren't very close.

"So stay away from me

The beast is ugly

I feel the rage

but I just can't hold it"

The blood was everywhere you looked now. If you didn't die from their hands, then from blood loss. Your hands shakily clutched your side, and a spurt of dark blood came bubbling over your lips. Retching up the black substance and then continuing on your way away from the DWMA, with your deadly pursuers coming ever so closer.

"There's scratches on the walls

In the closet in the halls

It comes awake

and I can't control it"

Your eyesight began to blur and you stumbled on a root. Falling to the ground, you hit your head and you completely faded out.

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"[Name]! Wait!" Soul yelled desperately after you ran out of the academy. 

Soul braced himself as he broke away from Kid and Black Star who were holding him back. Maka ran after you, following you into the woods, Soul on her heels.
They searched desperately for you, Soul was at his end. Until Maka screamed and he came running up behind her. What he saw stopped his heart, and dragged a strangled cry from his lips. There you lay, your eye whites showing, drenched in black blood and pooling underneath your body. Soul dropped to the ground, cradling your head, whispering apology after apology to your dead body. Soul would never forgive himself for this, letting you go this way. It was his fault for not protecting you.

"I-I'm so s-sorry...." He chocked out, tears rolling over his cheeks and dripping on to your face.

"I couldn't save you from this madness."

~Feel like a monster~   
angsty Soul.... deal with it.
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Student General Artist
Okay, I love the song, but WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE THIS SO SAD?!
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Ticcidestiny234 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  New Deviant
Cute but sad
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SoKawaiSoOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Aww
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lunathehedgefox Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yep i can see it....
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lovechan-33 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Oh moods the feels
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:iconblack-star2014:
Black-Star2014 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist

:iconmonsterplz:

 

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:iconhetalia-malta2123:
Hetalia-Malta2123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconfemportugal:
FemPortugal Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But. B-but. But!! Why!?!?!?!?!??
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SamSam2001 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
You should make another one like i somehow came back 2 life and cant remember nothing this story is awesome but so sadIcon1 Speed Painting Emote  Can't BELIVE I died tho:dead: remake PLEASE MAKE MORE:please: revamped 
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soul-love-sky101 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
More please.
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:iconhtfwolfgirl:
htfwolfgirl Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
You should make more stories like this. I like them! ^_^
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DarkestDreams1 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconmonsterplz:
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:icondarkestdreams1:
DarkestDreams1 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist
You deserve a monster
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Ashleystarnight199 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student Writer
Os sad but os good and I love the twisted end plus the song and story go good together. Nice job :)
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:iconroxywuzchu:
roxywuzchu Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
i died? QAQ
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:iconrrbzrulez:
Rrbzrulez Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So sad
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:iconthisiswar95:
ThisIsWar95 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
SO SAD BUT SO GOOD!!!
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:iconzinrea:
Zinrea Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconsawbplz:IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL
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:iconsilverwing14160:
silverwing14160 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Love it.I love dark endings hehehehe XD
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:iconkiddy96:
Kiddy96 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Poor Soul!
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:icongodblessusa1234567:
GodblessUSA1234567 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I was thinking of :monster from Skillet: good song >.<

:I..I ..FEEL LIKE A MONSTER: GOOD SONG >.<
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:iconsoulmate826:
SoulMate826 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
make another!
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:iconheartsouleaterevans:
HeartSoulEaterEvans Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
sad, creepy LOVE IT IT'S KINDA MY TYPE
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:iconjinxxnixx:
jinxxnixx Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
This is the second time I've cried today.
What is wrong with me?! XD
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:iconyasminkirkland1031:
YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
This is one of my favorite songs! I love Skillet!
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8Death-The-Girl8 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sad and kinda cute,
I love it! *-*
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Hinata-Wolf77 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012   General Artist
So sad. Awesome story!
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:iconbluuluv:
BluuLuv Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
:meow:
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XxxBlazerxxX Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
:iconsadplz: FHSJKFHSDJKFDJKFSHDHJF ITS SO SAD ; = ;....


but i still loved it c:
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:iconbluuluv:
BluuLuv Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
:iconsnugplz: cheer up~

thank you~ ;v;
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