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November 4, 2012
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"the secret side of me

I never let you see

I keep it caged

but I can't control it"

You ran as fast as you could, trailing blobs of black blood behind you. Your pupils dilated, and panting, your madness reaching your ends, very slowly.
You could hear the calls of them, but they weren't very close.

"So stay away from me

The beast is ugly

I feel the rage

but I just can't hold it"

The blood was everywhere you looked now. If you didn't die from their hands, then from blood loss. Your hands shakily clutched your side, and a spurt of dark blood came bubbling over your lips. Retching up the black substance and then continuing on your way away from the DWMA, with your deadly pursuers coming ever so closer.

"There's scratches on the walls

In the closet in the halls

It comes awake

and I can't control it"

Your eyesight began to blur and you stumbled on a root. Falling to the ground, you hit your head and you completely faded out.


"[Name]! Wait!" Soul yelled desperately after you ran out of the academy. 

Soul braced himself as he broke away from Kid and Black Star who were holding him back. Maka ran after you, following you into the woods, Soul on her heels.
They searched desperately for you, Soul was at his end. Until Maka screamed and he came running up behind her. What he saw stopped his heart, and dragged a strangled cry from his lips. There you lay, your eye whites showing, drenched in black blood and pooling underneath your body. Soul dropped to the ground, cradling your head, whispering apology after apology to your dead body. Soul would never forgive himself for this, letting you go this way. It was his fault for not protecting you.

"I-I'm so s-sorry...." He chocked out, tears rolling over his cheeks and dripping on to your face.

"I couldn't save you from this madness."

~Feel like a monster~   
angsty Soul.... deal with it.
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lunathehedgefox Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yep i can see it....
lovechan-33 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Oh moods the feels
Black-Star2014 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist



Hetalia-Malta2123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FemPortugal Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But. B-but. But!! Why!?!?!?!?!??
SamSam2001 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
You should make another one like i somehow came back 2 life and cant remember nothing this story is awesome but so sadIcon1 Speed Painting Emote  Can't BELIVE I died tho:dead: remake PLEASE MAKE MORE:please: revamped 
soul-love-sky101 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
More please.
htfwolfgirl Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
You should make more stories like this. I like them! ^_^
DarkestDreams1 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist
DarkestDreams1 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist
You deserve a monster
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