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"wanna race?" Your best friend Rainbowblitz asked you suddenly, as you and him were sitting in Cloudsdale. 

"Rainbow~ You know you'll win...." You sighed. Rainbowblitz was fast, his name said it all. He was the fastest, and strongest pegasus in Cloudsdale, but he still hung out with you. 

"Well, hey. You could beat me if you wanted to." Rainbow lightly punched your arm in good humor. Seeing you still in a bad mood, he added on; "If you win, I'll give you a prize." 

Your face lightened up a bit, "Really? what is it?" You asked, suddenly excited and looked up to Rainbowblitz. He just blushed.

"Can't tell you~ you'll find out if you win." He smirked, and made his way to the edge of the clouds, jumping off and floating up.

"Hmf. Fine! You're on!" You yelled, and sprang off the clouds, doing a summersault and landing next to Rainbowblitz.

As you two prepared for the race, you gained a few onlookers. One pegasus stepped up with a small, multicolored flag.

"On your mark....."
You tensed your wing muscles.

"Get set...."
You looked over at Rainbowblitz, he gazed at you, seeming to drown in your eyes.

"GO!!!" You raced out in to the sky with a burst of speed, and kept flying, not once looking back. The clouds whipped past your face, some you had to go through. It was a beautiful day, and usually you and Rainbow would be enjoying it, instead of having a silly race against each other. Bringing your attention to where Rainbowblitz was. he was right behind you, just keeping up. He caught your gaze and grinned. You expected a trick, so you just flew faster. The starting point was not so far away! if only..... if only you could win..... just this one time...... all the Pegasus's were cheering out your names, but the loudest was yours. Rainbow was landing on the ground, as you passed the finish line, and you realized all the pegasus's were cheering, for you HAD won.

You were surprised, but never the less looked over to a smug Rainbowblitz. He walked over to where you were standing.

"Your prize, miss." Rainbow smirked, and kissed the side of your mouth sweetly.

You blushed 0000122344456278 shades of red and that just made his smirk grow even wider. 

"Love you." Rainbow whispered in your ear before kissing you like there's no tomorrow.
MLP? MLP. :iconimsotiredplz:
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darkwolfbey Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student Artist
AAAWWW
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ILikeCupcakez123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
YAY! My earth pony OC sprouted wings! XD I am a dummy! 
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UltimateGamer103 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Student Artist
Mine Aswell!! Well My was a Unicorn!! xD 
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AshleyKenjhanara Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
If Your Oc Is A Unicorn Then That Means!

Unicorn + Wings = Alicorn

O.O
Dum Dun Dun!
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UltimateGamer103 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Artist
x3
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xXTimeLordGirlXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  New member Hobbyist Writer
Mine was a Time Pony. :|
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:iconultimategamer103:
UltimateGamer103 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Student Artist
x3 cool.
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Lol those numbers! This was adorable!
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:iconminecraftin-wolf:
minecraftin-wolf Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*In-human squealing* :3 :iconchummyplz:
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Epicness2014 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Artist
Awwww adorable :3
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:iconsoul-love-sky101:
soul-love-sky101 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Make more!!!!!!!
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:iconnek00taku:
nek00taku Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god I WISH THERE WERE MORE OF THESE CUZ THIS IS AWESOME
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xXxShadowNekoxXx Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THERE ARE NONE OF THESE

NO FLUFF

NO LEMONS

NADAH

NIEN

NON

SO THANK YOU
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Faustita Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
-laughs- At the numbers- xx))))
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mlpgirl111 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbrohoof1plz::iconbrohoof2plz:
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bluejigglypuff Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
why is there not a rainbow dash x reader anywhere
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Artist
Because their aren't many bronies/pegasisters out there who write fanfiction
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ninjaturtle338 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student General Artist

YAY!

Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Dash Joyful Wings La 

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Skywolf064 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Aw yeah! Clapping Pony Icon - Vinyl Scratch 
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autumnlovesnatsu Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
:blush: Cute Emoticon Blushing 
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WorldOfMuffins Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
-faints-
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Fawnwolf11 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh snappy snu shiz just hit the fan lol i love this its amazingg :3 and an awesome story!!
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gymleader97 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Da! :iconyayrussiaplz:
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ask-musicheart Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes! I love you! You are AWESOME! :iconrainbowdashclapplz:
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LugiaFlyer Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LUV CHU!! -Glomped-

:iconcryingrainbowsplz:
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BloodyxNightmair Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
OMG yesssss! *brohoof*. :icondjclapplz:
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CorgiIntheSea Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
FINALLY SOMEONE DID IT.
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Violetsparkle Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
I love it. C'mere before I fly away.
:iconsuperheroglompplz:
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TheGIRLWithTheBraid Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
.......ilikeit.........hi
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TheLaneyLo Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!
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hissing-yarrow Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
These are awesome. <3 I don't see why you don't write more inserts.
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kittykatluvur777 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the title says rainbowash
but the name is rainbowblitz
is that a male version?
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trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Yah Rainbow Blitz is gender bent Rainbow Dash.
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awesomesauce285 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Yes. Like all the other mane 6.
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Amber-Emerald Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Artist
Awesome story!!!!
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BluuLuv Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
thank you~!
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Amber-Emerald Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Artist
Your welcome!
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